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TG Questionnaire: A Damsel Indeed

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Eddie was an average guy, nothing really special. He was 19, living alone, single. Eddie was cleaning out the attic to see if he could find any of his old stuff. While he was shuffling through a box he noticed a paper fall out. Out of curiosity, Eddie picked the note up, with the words "If you were a girl" on them. He decided to fill out the paper, afterall, it gave him something to do.
The note read, " before we begin, please check before or after." Eddie knew what this meant. He knew the note would change him if he filled it out. He checked after, just in case he wanted to fix something.

Question 1: If you were a girl... would your handwriting be nice?”

"Yes." he put down, he figured most girls had nice writing.

Question 2: If you were a girl... would you like pink?

"Yes, it would be my favorite color." he wrote, he knew girls liked pink, and it was already his favorite as a male.

Question 3: If you were a girl... would your hair be straight or curly?

"Very curly" he wrote.

Question 4: If you were a girl... what color would your hair be?
"Blonde" he wrote, he'd always liked girls with blonde hair.

Question 5: If you were a girl... what color would your eyes be?
He put down "Blue." because he liked blue eyes.

Question 6: If you were a girl... would you like makeup?

"Yes, I'd wear a good amount of lipstick, and I want my eyes to pop!" Eddie put down.

Question 7: If you were a girl... what time period would you be in?

Eddie knew how to answer this one. He loved the "Wild West" theme, even though he never told anyone, he always wanted to know how it was like being a "damsel" during the time. He finally got his wish. "18th Century Western America, or the Wild West." he wrote, fairly excited about getting to experience it.

Question 8: If you were a girl... would you wear high heels?
"Yes, all the time." he wrote, he'd want to wear something that grabs attention.

Question 9: If you were a girl... what would you do for fun?

"When I was younger I read books, I wanted to be more educated than others. Now I sometimes stay in my room and read, or go out to the saloons to meet someone to come for me in my times of need." he wrote.

Question 10: If you were a girl... would you wear jewelry?

"A Pearl necklace, and nice silver earrings." he wrote, Eddie loved jewelry, and he wanted to know how female jewelry was.

Question 11: If you were a girl... what size would your breasts be?

Eddie thought very hard about this one. He wanted to them to be noticeable, but he didn't want to carry a "heavy load" all the time. He made up his mind and wrote down "A nice perky C-cup."

Question 12: If you were a girl... would you be into guys?

"Yes." he wrote, he was straight as a male, so he'd be straight female he thought.

Question 13: If you were a girl... would you shave?

"Yes." he wrote,

Question 14: If you were a girl... would you use pads or tampons?

Slightly embarrassed by the question he put down "Tampons" thinking it was a bit personal for the paper to be asking.

Question 15: If you were a girl... what clothes would you be wear?

He was excited for this one, he'd envisioned it for years. "A pink dress, and a lighter shade of  pink gloves. A pink ribbon around my waist and ruffles up the leg area, and stop at the ribbon. and pink high heels to match. There would be laces at my chest area, and show a bit of cleavage. Two of those balls at each of my shoulder." He described the best he could with his male minds, as he didn't know the names of things on the dresses.

Question 16: If you would were a girl... would you be wearing briefs, bikini, thong or boxers?
Eddie didn't know much about female underwear, he didn't even know they were so many choices. he wrote down "bikini" not really knowing too much about it.

Question 17: If you were a girl... what would be your intelligence? One being stupid and ten being high enough to drive the class nerd up the wall.

"7." Eddie wrote, he wanted it to remain more or less the same.

Question 18: If you were a girl... what type of bra would you be wearing?

"Just a regular silk bra." he wrote, he didn't really know there were different kinds.

Question 19: If you were a girl... how old would you be, how tall would you be without shoes and what would you weigh without clothes?(Don't lie)

"22, 5ft 3in, and 150lbs." he wrote, not really thinking to much about it.

Question 20: If you were a girl... what would your name be?

"Ella." he wrote. He wanted a girl's name, but something similar to his own.

Question 21: If you were a girl...who would be aware of these changes(including yourself) and what memories would you have?

Eddie thought hard about this one, and if he wanted to remember his old life. He wanted to start new, but he wanted to experience it with his old mind, he always dreamed of this after all. Finally he had an idea. "No one would be aware but me. However, I would forget everything about my male life, and only remember my female actions with my old mindset the day after I find a man to come for me in my time of need, someone to count on. I would have memories of growing up female during the Wild West."

Question 21: Would people know about you in your new time?

"No, they would simply know me as the girl who just moved in." he wrote down, he never wanted to be famous.

Question 23: NOTE: Once this is filled out, changes will begin. Is there any unique way you want to be changed(Pain/less, Not at all, are not valid)?

"I want 1 hour in my current time, house, etc. with no new female memories after becoming a girl before going back in time. I also want the changes to start at the top and bottom of my body, and complete in the middle.

As Eddie filled out the last question he put his pencil down. The note vanished into thin air. Eddie ran to his mirror to see the changes himself. Suddenly he was struck with a wave of vertigo as his body began changing.

Eddie's hair became much more longer as it grew just past his shoulders. He watched as it became much more curlier and as it got lighter and lighter as his hair changed from brown to blonde.  Meanwhile his feet and legs were changing. All body hair left his body, leaving much smoother legs. His legs thinned out, leaving him with a very female body below the belt. He felt his Adams apple vanish, leaving him with a much higher pitched voice. "This feels so weird" Eddie said out loud in a much more female voice, as he wanted to hear his new voice. Any hair on his face receded, leaving a very smooth face. Eddie's nose became more petite and female looking. His lips puffed out a bit as lipstick was applied to it, and makeup was applied to the rest of his face. He felt a pain in his eyes, and had to close them. When they opened, his once brown eyes were now blue. As the changes continued up his legs, he felt a weird feeling at his stomach. Looking down, he noticed his fat moving down towards his hips and butt. After being distributed, his hips flared out, leaving him a much more curvy figure, and a bit more in the rear. His arms lost all hair and muscle, leaving a much smoother and girly look to his arms. His fingers became much more dainty and female looking as his nails also grew out a bit, knowing he'd now have to worry about breaking his, or rather her nails.

Eddie knew what was coming next, and it would make him much more of a "her" and he wasn't excited about it. He felt his male partners go inside him, leaving nothing much there. He felt down at his crotch only to find a flat surface. Eddie felt a sharp pain down there, as his insides were changing to fit that of a females. Eddie was much more of an Ella now. Ella's stomach feeling returned, as the rest of her fat went up to her chest. She saw two mounds growing out, and kept growing and stopped at a C-cup size, his body now looking exactly like what he described. Ella was overwhelmed be the weight of it, she held them with her arms hoping her bra would form soon.

As if on cue, her clothes started to change. She felt her shoes melt and her heels get picked up off the ground and her shoes became high heels. The once blue shoes then slowly turned into a pink color. Ella's pant legs fused together to become one as the dress began to form. It went up her legs rather fast, as it gained a "ruffled" look to it. At her waist, a big pink ribbon wrapped around her, and she thought it looked so cute. As this was happening her boxers began to get smaller as they morphed into a bikini. The dress continued to formed upward rather normally. When the changes reached up to her chest she pulled her arms away and was thrown offbalance, still not used to her newly found weight. She was relieved at the next change, as her white T-shirt shrunk upwards. The shoulders were left with only two straps on each. The back almost completely gone but for a strap to put the new bra on, connected to the two straps on the shoulders. The front change took the longest, as the front of it morphed into two ball shapes and extend to form C-cups to hold her breast. Ella was relieved to have a bra to hold her new breasts, as it was causing her back-ache. The dress moved up, and at her chest, laces starting forming and continued to the top of the dress. It showed a bit of cleavage, enough to be noticed he thought in her male mind. The two "balls" formed on her shoulders as the dress finished forming. Lastly, two pink gloves formed on her hands and extend to her just before her elbows. She saw a necklace with pearls around it form. She felt a pinch in each ear as they became pierced and 2 earrings formed on each ear. 

Ella's changes were done. All that was left for her female memories, but the note granted his request. Taking a step and almost falling, she caught herself, not used to walking in heels, and not used to her new weight at her chest and rear. It took her a while, but she got used to walking around in heels with her new body. Ella looked at her new self in the mirror. Her still male mind thought she looked amazing, re-assuring to her that she could hopefully find someone. A bit aroused, she took off her heels and dress and laid it neatly on her bed. Ella looked at her now, almost naked body, only with a bra and bikini on. She kept fiddling around with her bra until she found out how to unhook it. Ella slid it off and played with her new "pals" afterall, she still had the mind of a man. Done with that, she picked the bra back up. She puts the straps over her shoulders and fiddled around with the "hook" again. Trying to put it back proved harder than she thought, and had to use the mirror to help her. Ella finally got it. Though she didn't like this part, She examined her new female bits below. A little freaked out about not having his "little buddy" it was something he'd have to get used to.

Ella looked at the clock, noticing that whole ordeal took 10 minutes, 7 of those minutes trying to figure out how a bra works. Ella was starting to wish she had some memories of being female. She noticed she had 50 minutes before leaving this time period for good. Ella decided to look at her wardrobe in this time to see if it changed alongside her. She didn't want to wear such an old looking dress during this time period. Hoping for the best when she opened her closet she was relieved to find female jeans and shirts. She put on a pair of one of her jeans, and a simple white tank top. She went to the mirror to see herself. She was surprised at first, still not quite used to a girl staring back. She then examined her new modern female look. She noticed how tight the jeans were around her legs. Ella's eyes went down to her hips, and noticed how much they flare out compared to the rest of legs. She turned around to see her pants hugging her butt rather tightly. She examined her shirt. It barely reached her waist, and showed a lot of cleavage. Ella's still very male mind was turned on by her body. She looked back in her closet hoping to find comfortable shoes to wear. She found some tennis shoes and sandals. Ella decided on wearing sandals. She looked at her hair, noticed how messed up it got in her misadventures. She went to her bathroom hoping to find tools that a girl would use. She found a curling iron and blow dryer. Relived, she did her hair again and made it look pretty. Looking at the clock again, she noticed that it took 30 minutes to do. Ella knew girls had a stereotype for taking forever, and she knew that she wasn't an exception. With 20 minutes before her last change, she decided she would go to the store, and she what some people would say/look. It would give her a good 15 minutes of that, and time to get home for the final changes. She went to where her wallet was only to find a purse there instead. She looked inside to find her wallet, car keys, small mirror, a small makeup station and her "helper" in case "mother nature called." She looked in her wallet, curious what her driver's licenses looked liked, she noticed her age was 22, knowing she did in fact get older, and that her name was not longer Eddie, but Ella. She also found a lot of cards to different stores than before. Cards to Home Depot and Sports Center were now cards for Macy's and Bed Bath And Beyond. Her credit cards more or less remained the same, except were mostly all pink and had Ella opposed to Eddie. After looking through the rest of her cards she put her wallet back and took out her keys. She zipped up her purse and headed out to her car. Her car was pretty much the same. A convertible, but was now pink instead of black. He'd always wanted it pink, but feared he'd be mayed fun of, and now it didn't matter as he was now a she. She decided to go to a Target, just because it was close.

Ella arrived at the store and walked in. An employee greeted her as "madame." She ignored him at first, thinking it was someone else, but then greeted him back after realizing she was a madame now. "I really have to get used to people calling me female names" Ella thought to herself. She decided she'd go to 3 areas. Video games to see what people like the old him thought of the new him. Clothes, to see what new adventures awaited in that frontier, and beauty supplies, to see the female world.

Knowing she had very limited time, she heading to the beauty supplies. She spent 5 minutes looking at mascara, makeup, and smelling perfume. Ella looked over at times to she an associate looking at her. She blushed at the idea of men being attracted to her, she was still Eddie on the inside. She began heading to her next stop when the associate greeted her awkwardly and asked for her number. This was an all new kind of weird. Ella was being hit on by a guy. She knew that this might happen going in, but not so soon. She decided she would give him her number as she wouldn't be in a time with phones anyways. She reached into her purse and found some paper and a pen. As she was writing, the man introduced himself as Billy. She gave him the paper and introduced herself as Eddie. "Eddie?" the man said. "I said Ella" a lot of people think I say Eddie at first." Ella said quite nervously, she really needed to get used to being Ella and not Eddie. "Alright, whatever." Billy said as he didn't really care and found her quite beautiful. Ella bid farewell and continued on her adventure. She thought that Billy was sweet, but as this isn't her permanent time period, she had to move on from it and forget about it.

She headed towards the clothes. She looked around rather bored, as he never found clothes exciting, and nothing really caught her eye. Ella decided to make her last stop at the video games. As a male, he loved them, and knew that he wouldn't have them in her new life. She figured to get a last demo in and see games that she may never play. She approached the 3DS and began playing the Mario Tennis game for it. She knew she had a good 7 minutes before she had to go, so she had time for a few demos. Ella played liked anyone would, and heard a few words from passerbys. Things like "Why isn't she in the kitchen isle?" "A girl that plays games, awesome!" "I bet she sucks." and even mentions about how "hot" she was, and that ontop of the fact she was playing games. All in all, she was actually generally offended by most of it. Even as a male he thought that women could have the same interest as men and vice versa. When people thought she was bad just because she was a girl she got generally upset about it, but chose to ignore it, as it would be irrelevant soon enough. She finished her time with the 3DS and decided to go towards an Xbox demo machine. She wrapped her hands around the controller which was about at her stomach, not used to being so short. She looked down at the controller, only to see her chest covering most of it. A little sad by that, as she had to look down at the controller to find buttons. Having to look over her chest constantly got annoying enough to make her stop early. Ella just browsed through the games, hearing more comments about her, some good, some bad. She knew what this experience would be like going in, many men he knew loved it when a girl played games, and since, for now at least, he was one. Walking out of the store Ella saw her old best friend Nate. She went to him, not saying a word, and noticed him checking her out. She kissed him passionately, and left, leaving him a bit bewildered. She figured she'd give him one last story about him/her, despite him not even knowing him/her anymore.

She returned home, with only a few minutes left in this time period, she changed back into her dress. As she finished putting on her heels and got up, a wave of vertigo washed over her. She watched as her white walls became wooden and got a western look to it, the ceiling shortly following it. She looked at her huge entertainment center as it was changed to a bookcase, with her once video game consoles and TV turning into books. Her lamp shrunk down and changed into a lit candlestick. Ella's bed became much less fancy and more western. Her clock replaced by a sundial near her window. She walked over to her window and opened it. She looked outside and saw a much more "Wild West" setting. With dirt roads and saloons. She saw kids playing and the Sheriff out on patrol. She even heard a few girls talking about the "new girl in town." Ella was a little bewildered by that. Lastly, she felt a pain in her brain. New memories filled her mind. She remembered all about growing up as a girl. She remembered potty training and walking. She remembered growing breasts and wearing a training bra, which she kept because she want to remember her first bra. She remember her changing body and when started to get a more female figure. She remembered liking boys, but never dated, She remember moving out of her home town to a new town called "Snakewood." where she now lived in a parlor, where she worked to pay the bills. She now had all of her new memories of growing up female. She now also had the mind of a female, finding boys a lot more attractive, and more interest in clothes instead of tools. She still had memory of her old life, and figured it was time to experience her new. She walked over to her closet to look at her new wardrobe. She found mostly dresses and her work uniform. The only shoes she had were high heels, all of which where pink or white, to match her dresses. She changed into her work uniform and headed down to start working.
A little story I wrote that I had in mind for a while and god around to writing. I'm going to write a good ending for this, but I'm not sure what route I want to take, so alternate endings may happen, I'm not sure. Used TF-Wizards version of the quiz on this. These also may be a regular thing, but I'm not sure yet.
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It is really very good. There is only one obvious issue, being that during the second half of the story the pronoun changes regularly. This does not bother me too much but I could see it bothering some other people. Other than that it is very good. I like Eddie's feelings about girls playing games but that is just my opinion. I think that you could say: seven instead of 7 or ten instead of 10. That would make the story flow a little better. I like the originality of the discovery of the paper in the first place. In most other stories with the TG Questionnaire, the main character receives the paper as homework. I like that there is something different out there