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Mystery Planet (Collab)

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"It's going down!" the Commando said over the intercom. "We're coming in hot! Strap in tight!" he said to the few passengers aboard his cargo ship. He and his ship were heading to a strange planet that was closest to them. "Brace for impact!" he called before everything went black. 

When the Commando regained his vision, he felt his whole body in pain. He got up very slowly to avoid hurting himself more. He looked around as saw the crew members weren't lucky enough to make it through the crash. The Commando closed the eyes of the deceased and look around for weapons incase he needed them. He found two laser pistols on the ground and kept one on his hand, the other in a holster. He went to the radio to try and contact someone. "Hello? Anyone? Please respond. This is uh...the Commando." he said, unable to recall his name. "Amnesia, how fun." he said to himself. "Anyone out there?" the Commando said one last time. He hit it a bit hard, "Busted." he sighed. "Maybe there is some communication on this planet I can use. 

The Commando loaded up his pistols, with only a few extra clips put in a pocket as he grabbed a flashlight and went to try and find some way of getting a message out there. He journaled through the dark dungeon, finding no signs of life. "Its almost deserted." the Commando said to himself. He heard a noise and quickly got ready to fire, lowering his weapon as it was just a bat. "There's something living here at least." the Commando sighed as he kept on his trek. He hears big footsteps, almost of monster size and begins to walk slower. He flashes his light onto a large lizard like monster, who begins to run away. The Commando gives chase in hopes of being able to communicate with it. 

The Commando chases it down around the corner as it hits a dead end. He notices it looks scared, most likely the weapon in his hand. "I'm not going to hurt you, just need some help from you." the Commando said in a calming voice. Upon seeing it still look scared, he slowly lowers his weapon, holstering it. "See? I won't hurt you." the Commando said trying to calm the creature down. It seemed to have stopped cowering in fear and more open to looking normal, not seeing the Commando as a threat. 

"Alright, both of us are peaceful?" the Commando said slowly, hoping the language would transfer. The creature nodded his head, signalling it seemed to had understood. "I'm stuck here, away from everything I have, I need help getting home." the Commando said again, hoping the more complicated sentence would translate. The creature gave a more confused nod, as if it didn't understand why the Commando wanted what he wanted. 

"Can you help me?" the Commando asked politely. The creature didn't move. "Are you going to help me?" the Commando asked more sternly. "Are you helping me or not?" he asked, raising his pistol. The creature let out a roar as another one walked behind the Commando. It let out a much more monstrous roar, causing him to drop his pistol, shooting a beam that grazed the monster you tried to make peace with. The creature let out a roar before biting the Commando on the shoulder. Surprisingly, it didn't nearly as much as he thought it would. Soon both creatures ran off, leaving the Commando alone. 

The Commando went against the wall, leaning on it. He took his shirt off to how bad his bite was. However what he saw surprised him. Instead of a bite, the skin had become black and scaley, not only that, but it was spreading! "What in the world." the Commando said to himself as he watched it grow down his arms. His shoulders cracked together as grey plates formed over them, his arms become more slender than the creature's he saw before. The Commando watched in horror as his hands turned into large claws, much like the creature's. "Am,am I turning into one of them!?" the Commando said out loud, noticing his voice was higher pitched. 

The Commando's skin became black and scaly all over the rest of his body, his original skin tissue replaced with the new one. His head became the same size of his neck, and took on a more reptilian shape. The Commando blinked and his eyes were pure white yellow. His lips lost color and became a large jaw with sharp teeth. The Commando felt his legs strengthened, yet had a hint of feminine features as his feet became more reptilian and monster-like. Two pads formed around both of his ankles, hugging them tightly. 

The Commando's shape began to alter. His hips grew out wider along with his rear. He felt his back push it as it went into a kind of arc. The Commando's sides caved in, granted him with a much more feminine looking figure compared to the others he had encountered. The Commando felt his chest swell up, as two mounds pushed forward, a set of breasts had formed on his body! The Commando felt his manhood leave him, turning into reptilian womanhood, causing a painful pleasure to come to him, or her now. Lastly, a long black tail burst out from the Commando's back, growing long enough that it dragged on the ground. The Commando's sudden tail growth caused enough pain to make her black out. She slowly slid down the wall until she laid there, blacked out. She entered a human male, now a female creature. 
My part of a collab between :icongoldencharmander888: and myself. He wanted me to lay the stage and do the transformation, while he does the other half. 

The transformation is a Female Lemurian ( riskofrain.wikia.com/wiki/Lemu… ). He also wanted the character to be simply called "The Commando" hence that's why he's called that. 
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